I'm including this example really to show a bad example - where to start? The spelling and punctuation throughout is shocking. I will definitely see this as a lesson learnt to check and check again on this to make sure I get it right. They have also used things like 'U R' instead of 'you are' which I think just looks crap as well. Also, the fonts that have been used are just way too decorative and even hard to read at times. If the sound was to be turned off it maybe wouldn't make sense, and the time lapse at the end for about half a minute where nothing is happening just looks crap as well.